[tbb-dev] security slider text for tor browser mobile

[Linda Naeun Lee]

Tbb-devs:

The UX team have been rewording the interface text that accompanies the 
security slider (onion button > privacy and security settings) for tor 
browser mobile. Our goal was to refactor the text so that we accurately 
communicate the changes in browser functionality and security benefits 
to the user. We want to finalize the text by the end of this week.

Let us know what you think of the changes, correct anything you see 
wrong, and tell us if we are missing anything. Here is a link to a 
google doc that has the text:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U_tbrC1lpuKHZg_QKD_TUVd6ImjTJ3jWZkSxjXgceZI/edit?usp=sharing

Anyone with the link can comment on the document, so feel free to share 
the link around to anyone you think that can help! Please focus your 
comments on editing the text, rather than giving us feedback on how the 
interface should be (we plan to prototype the interface later, but it 
will unexcitingly be as similar to the desktop version as possible).

It would be nice to have the same security settings and text in the 
desktop and mobile browsers! Isa has informally talked to some of you, 
and there seems to be enthusiasm about this. Let us you would be willing 
to incorporate these changes into the desktop version as well.

Cheers,
Linda

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