[tor-commits] r26358: {website} add a first go at telling people to be wary of nsa-level att (website/trunk/en)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2013-09-21 09:16:58 +0000 (Sat, 21 Sep 2013)
New Revision: 26358

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
add a first go at telling people to be wary of nsa-level attackers.

also, nobody reading our front page knows what remote login is.


Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2013-09-20 17:23:33 UTC (rev 26357)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2013-09-21 09:16:58 UTC (rev 26358)
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
     	<div id="maincol">
       	<div id="banner">
         	<ul>
-          	<li>Tor prevents anyone from learning your location or browsing habits.</li>
-            <li>Tor is for web browsers, instant messaging clients, remote logins, and more.</li>
+          	<li>Tor prevents people from learning your location or browsing habits.</li>
+            <li>Tor is for web browsers, instant messaging clients, and more.</li>
             <li>Tor is free and open source for Windows, Mac, Linux/Unix, and Android</li>
           </ul>
         	<h1 class="headline">Anonymity Online</h1>
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@
             you defend against a form of network surveillance that
             threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential business
             activities and relationships, and state security known as <a
-            href="<page about/overview>">traffic analysis</a><br><span
-            class="continue"><a href="<page about/overview>">Learn more
-            about Tor »</a></span></p>
+            href="<page about/overview>">traffic analysis</a>.<br>
+            <span class="continue"><a href="<page about/overview>">Learn
+            more about Tor »</a></span></p>
           </div>
           <!-- END SUBCOL -->
           <div class="subcol">
@@ -157,6 +157,14 @@
           <table>
 	    <tr>
               <td>
+            It may be that Tor can't protect you against the NSA's
+            large-scale Internet surveillance, and it may be that no
+            deployed anonymous communication tool can. We're working on
+            writing clear explanations for the issues. Stay tuned!
+	      </td>
+	    </tr>
+	    <tr>
+              <td>
                 <div class="calendar"><span class="month">Sep</span><br><span class="day">11</span></div>
                 <p>Tor, NSA, GCHQ, and QUICK ANT Speculation. Read <a href="https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tor-nsa-gchq-and-quick-ant-speculation">our thoughts</a>.</p>
 	      </td>