[tor-commits] r26191: {website} Tweak a couple paragraphs for better phrasing. (website/trunk/about/en)

[Mike Perry]

Author: mikeperry
Date: 2013-05-22 01:20:19 +0000 (Wed, 22 May 2013)
New Revision: 26191

Modified:
   website/trunk/about/en/jobs-senior-qa.wml
Log:
Tweak a couple paragraphs for better phrasing.



Modified: website/trunk/about/en/jobs-senior-qa.wml
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--- website/trunk/about/en/jobs-senior-qa.wml	2013-05-21 00:25:47 UTC (rev 26190)
+++ website/trunk/about/en/jobs-senior-qa.wml	2013-05-22 01:20:19 UTC (rev 26191)
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
 
 <p>
 
+The Tor Project seeks to deploy nightly builds and continuous integration for
+as many of its key software components and platform combinations as possible.
 Your job would be build and deploy the initial functional versions of a wide
-range of testing frameworks and continuous integration systems. The Tor
-Project seeks to deploy nightly builds and continuous integration for as many
-of its key software components and platform combinations as possible.
+range of testing frameworks and continuous integration systems. 
 
 </p>
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
 Have experience programming in multiple languages, including Java,
 python/ruby, bash scripting, and Javascript. You must also have experience
-working with multiple testing/automation frameworks on multiple platforms.
+working with testing/automation frameworks on multiple platforms.
 
 </li>