[tor-commits] r25924: {website} tweaks from talking to weasel (website/trunk/projects/en)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2012-12-02 09:28:11 +0000 (Sun, 02 Dec 2012)
New Revision: 25924

Modified:
   website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml
Log:
tweaks from talking to weasel


Modified: website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml	2012-11-29 16:25:02 UTC (rev 25923)
+++ website/trunk/projects/en/obfsproxy-debian-instructions.wml	2012-12-02 09:28:11 UTC (rev 25924)
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
     <p>
     Add the <a href="<page docs/debian>#development">development Tor
     APT repository</a> and run the specified commands to install tor
-    and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x Tor because
+    and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x because
     it knows how to automatically report your obfsproxy address to <a
     href="https://bridges.torproject.org/?transport=obfs2">BridgeDB</a>.
     </p>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 Exitpolicy reject *:*
 
 \## CHANGEME_1 -> provide a nickname for your bridge, can be anything you like
-Nickname CHANGEME_1
+\#Nickname CHANGEME_1
 \## CHANGEME_2 -> provide some email address so we can contact you if there's a problem
 \#ContactInfo CHANGEME_2
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
     </pre>
 
     <p>
-    Don't forget to edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields!
+    Don't forget to uncomment and edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields!
     </p>
 
     <h3>Step 3: Launch Tor and verify that it bootstraps</h3>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
     </pre>
 
     <p>
-    If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait till it gets to
+    If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait until it gets to
     100%.
     </p>