[tor-commits] r24494: {website} Minor language cleanup (website/trunk/docs/en)

[Robert Ransom]

Author: rransom
Date: 2011-03-28 21:11:51 +0000 (Mon, 28 Mar 2011)
New Revision: 24494

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml
Log:
Minor language cleanup

Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml	2011-03-28 21:11:24 UTC (rev 24493)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/rpms.wml	2011-03-28 21:11:51 UTC (rev 24494)
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
   </div>
   <div id="maincol"> 
     <a id="rpms"></a>
-    <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for rpm-based
+    <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for RPM-based
     linux distributions.</a></h2>
     <br>
     
-    <p>Do not use the packages in the native repositories. They are
+    <p><strong>Do not</strong> use the packages in the native repositories. They are
     frequently out of date. That means you'll be missing stability and
     security fixes.
     </p>
@@ -54,8 +54,9 @@
     
     <p style="font-size: small">
     The DNS name <code>deb.torproject.org</code> is actually a set of independent
-    servers in a DNS round robin configuration.  If you for some reason cannot
-    access it you might try to use the name of one of its part instead.  Try
+    servers in a DNS round-robin configuration.  If for some reason you cannot
+    use it, you might be able to access one of the individual servers
+    instead.  Try
     <code>deb-master.torproject.org</code>,
     <code>mirror.netcologne.de</code> or
     <code>tor.mirror.youam.de</code>.
@@ -71,7 +72,7 @@
     
     <p>
     If you'd like to build from source, please follow the <a
-    href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">rpm creation instructions</a>.
+    href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">RPM creation instructions</a>.
     </p>
     
     <hr>