[tor-commits] r25243: {website} fix grammar in faq entry (website/trunk/docs/en)

[Roger Dingledine]

Author: arma
Date: 2011-12-05 00:59:37 +0000 (Mon, 05 Dec 2011)
New Revision: 25243

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml
Log:
fix grammar in faq entry


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml
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--- website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml	2011-12-02 18:48:55 UTC (rev 25242)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/faq.wml	2011-12-05 00:59:37 UTC (rev 25243)
@@ -1090,12 +1090,13 @@
 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#DoesntWork">I installed Tor but it's not working.</a></h3>
 
 <p>
-Once you've got the Tor bundle up and running, the first questions to ask is if 
-your Tor is able to establish a circuit? 
+Once you've got the Tor bundle up and running, the first question to
+ask is whether your Tor client is able to establish a circuit.
 </p>
 
 <p>If Tor can establish a circuit, the onion icon in
-Vidalia will turn green. You can also check in the Vidalia
+Vidalia will turn green (and if you're running Tor Browser Bundle, it will
+automatically launch a browser for you). You can also check in the Vidalia
 Control Panel to make sure it says "Connected to the Tor
 network!" under Status. For those not using Vidalia, check your <a
 href="#Logs">Tor logs</a> for
@@ -1113,7 +1114,8 @@
 <li>Check your system clock. If it's more than a few hours off, Tor will
 refuse to build circuits. For Microsoft Windows users, synchronize your
 clock under the clock -> Internet time tab. In addition, correct the
-day and date under the 'Date & Time' Tab.</li>
+day and date under the 'Date & Time' Tab. Also make sure your time
+zone is correct.</li>
 <li>Is your Internet connection <a href="#FirewallPorts">firewalled
 by port</a>, or do you normally need to use a <a
 href="<wikifaq>#MyInternetconnectionrequiresanHTTPorSOCKSproxy.">proxy</a>?