[or-cvs] r23578: {website} fix mistakes and bad links in the osx instructions. (website/trunk/docs/en)

Andrew Lewman andrew at torproject.org
Mon Oct 11 12:22:27 UTC 2010


Author: phobos
Date: 2010-10-11 12:22:26 +0000 (Mon, 11 Oct 2010)
New Revision: 23578

Modified:
   website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml
Log:
fix mistakes and bad links in the osx instructions.


Modified: website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml	2010-10-11 07:55:59 UTC (rev 23577)
+++ website/trunk/docs/en/tor-doc-osx.wml	2010-10-11 12:22:26 UTC (rev 23578)
@@ -33,37 +33,36 @@
     and <a href="http://www.pps.jussieu.fr/~jch/software/polipo/">Polipo</a> (a web proxy)
     into one package, with the four applications pre-configured to work
     together.
-    Download either the <a href="../<package-osx-bundle-stable>">stable</a>
-    or the <a href="../<package-osx-bundle-alpha>">experimental</a> version
-    of the OS X bundle for Intel, or look for more options on the <a href="<page
+    Download either the <a href="<page download/download>#tor">stable</a>
+    or the <a href="<page download/download>#tor">experimental</a> version
+    of the OS X bundle, or look for more options on the <a href="<page
     download/download>">download page</a>.
     </p>
     
     <p>Once you've downloaded the dmg, double-click and let it mount.
-    Browse to the now open Vidalia Bundle in Finder.  It's easy to install the bundle; simply drag and drop the Vidalia
-    onion icon to the Applications folder.  Optionally, double click the
-    "install torbutton" script and let it install torbutton into Firefox.
-    You can also get Torbutton from Mozilla Add-ons by searching for
-    "torbutton".</p>
+    Browse to the now open Vidalia Bundle in Finder.  It's easy to
+    install the bundle; simply drag and drop the Vidalia onion icon to the
+    Applications folder.  Optionally, double click the "install torbutton"
+    script and let it install torbutton into Firefox.  You can also get
+    Torbutton from Mozilla Add-ons by searching for "torbutton".</p>
     
-    <p>When you are finished installing, you can start Vidalia by selecting its icon
-    from your Applications folder. A dark onion with a red X in your dock means
-    Tor is not currently running. You can start Tor by selecting Start from the
-    "Tor" menu at the top of your screen.
+    <p>When you are finished installing, you can start Vidalia by
+    selecting its icon from your Applications folder. A dark onion with a
+    red X in your dock means Tor is not currently running. You can start
+    Tor by selecting Start from the "Tor" menu at the top of your screen.
     </p>
     
     <p>When Tor is running, Vidalia's dock icon will look like the following:
     </p>
     
     <p><img alt="vidalia running tor"
-    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-osx-vidalia.png"
-   /></p>
+    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-osx-vidalia.png" /></p>
     
     <p>Polipo is installed as part of the Tor bundle package
-    installer. Once it is installed, it will start automatically when your
-    computer is restarted.
-    You do not need to configure Polipo to use Tor &mdash; a custom Polipo 
-    configuration for Tor has been installed as part of the installer package.
+    installer. Once it is installed, it will start automatically when
+    your computer is restarted.  You do not need to configure Polipo
+    to use Tor &mdash; a custom Polipo configuration for Tor has been
+    installed as part of the installer package.
     </p>
     
     <hr>
@@ -71,36 +70,32 @@
     <h2><a class="anchor" href="#using">Step Two: Configure your applications to use Tor</a></h2>
     <br>
     
-    <p>After installing, you need to configure your
-    applications to use them. The first step is to set up web browsing.</p>
+    <p>After installing, you need to configure your applications to use
+    them. The first step is to set up web browsing.</p>
     
     <p>You should use Tor with Firefox and Torbutton, for best safety.
-    Torbutton was installed for you.  Click on the red "Tor Disabled" toggle button to
-    turn Tor on, and you're all set: </p>
+    Torbutton was installed for you.  Click on the red "Tor Disabled"
+    toggle button to turn Tor on, and you're all set: </p>
     
     <p><img alt="Torbutton plugin for Firefox"
-    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-torbutton.png"
-   /></p>
+    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-torbutton.png" /></p>
     
-    <p>
-    If you plan to run Firefox on a different computer than Tor, see the <a
-    href="<wikifaq>#SocksListenAddress">FAQ
-    entry for running Tor on a different computer</a>.
-    </p>
+    <p> If you plan to run Firefox on a different computer than Tor,
+    see the <a href="<wikifaq>#SocksListenAddress">FAQ entry for running
+    Tor on a different computer</a>.  </p>
     
-    <p>To Torify other applications that support HTTP proxies, just
-    point them at Polipo (that is, localhost port 8118). To use SOCKS
-    directly (for instant messaging, Jabber, IRC, etc), you can point
-    your application directly at Tor (localhost port 9050), but see <a
-    href="<wikifaq>#SOCKSAndDNS">this
-    FAQ entry</a> for why this may be dangerous. For applications
+    <p>To Torify other applications that support HTTP proxies,
+    just point them at Polipo (that is, localhost port 8118). To
+    use SOCKS directly (for instant messaging, Jabber, IRC, etc),
+    you can point your application directly at Tor (localhost
+    port 9050), but see <a href="<wikifaq>#SOCKSAndDNS">this FAQ
+    entry</a> for why this may be dangerous. For applications
     that support neither SOCKS nor HTTP, take a look at <a
-    href="http://www.taiyo.co.jp/~gotoh/ssh/connect.html">connect</a> or
-    <a href="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/">socat</a>.</p>
+    href="http://www.taiyo.co.jp/~gotoh/ssh/connect.html">connect</a>
+    or <a href="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/">socat</a>.</p>
     
     <p>For information on how to Torify other applications, check out the
-    <a href="<wiki>/TheOnionRouter/TorifyHOWTO">Torify
-    HOWTO</a>.
+    <a href="<wiki>/TheOnionRouter/TorifyHOWTO">Torify HOWTO</a>.
     </p>
     
     <hr>
@@ -110,13 +105,11 @@
     
     <p>
     Next, you should try using your browser with Tor and make
-    sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on
-    <a href="https://check.torproject.org/">the
-    Tor detector</a>
-    and see whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.
-    (If that site is down, see <a
-    href="<wikifaq>#IsMyConnectionPrivate">this
-    FAQ entry</a> for more suggestions on how to test your Tor.)
+    sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on <a
+    href="https://check.torproject.org/">the Tor detector</a> and see
+    whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.  (If that site is down,
+    see <a href="<wikifaq>#IsMyConnectionPrivate">this FAQ entry</a>
+    for more suggestions on how to test your Tor.)
     </p>
     
     <p>If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
@@ -129,12 +122,11 @@
     </p>
     
     <p>If it's still not working, look at <a
-    href="<wikifaq>#ItDoesntWork">this
-    FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
+    href="<wikifaq>#ItDoesntWork">this FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
     
     <p>
-    Once it's working, learn more about
-    <a href="<page download/download>#Warning">what Tor does and does not offer</a>.
+    Once it's working, learn more about <a href="<page
+    download/download>#Warning">what Tor does and does not offer</a>.
     </p>
     
     <hr>
@@ -152,11 +144,10 @@
     IP addresses.</p>
     
     <p>Having relays in many different places on the Internet is what
-    makes Tor users secure. <a
-    href="<wikifaq>#RelayAnonymity">You
-    may also get stronger anonymity yourself</a>,
-    since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
-    computer or were relayed from others.</p>
+    makes Tor users secure. <a href="<wikifaq>#RelayAnonymity">You may
+    also get stronger anonymity yourself</a>, since remote sites can't
+    know whether connections originated at your computer or were relayed
+    from others.</p>
     
     <p>Read more at our <a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">Configuring a relay</a>
     guide.</p>
@@ -166,11 +157,13 @@
     <h2><a class="anchor" href="#uninstall">How To Uninstall Tor and Privoxy</a></h2>
     <br>
     
-    <p>There are two ways to uninstall the bundle from your computer, using
-    Finder or a command line or Terminal-based uninstaller.  If you want to remove Tor on OSX, here's how:</p>
+    <p>There are two ways to uninstall the bundle from your computer,
+    using Finder or a command line or Terminal-based uninstaller.
+    If you want to remove Tor on OSX, here's how:</p>
     
-    <p>Change your application proxy settings back to their original values.
-       If you just want to stop using Tor, you can end at this point.</p>
+    <p>Change your application proxy settings back to their original
+    values.  If you just want to stop using Tor, you can end at this
+    point.</p>
     
     <p>If you want to completely remove Tor, and your account has Admin
     Privileges, then proceed as follows:</p>



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