[or-cvs] r19473: {website} better wording (website/trunk/en)

[phobos at seul.org]

Author: phobos
Date: 2009-05-07 13:29:57 -0400 (Thu, 07 May 2009)
New Revision: 19473

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/running-a-mirror.wml
Log:
better wording


Modified: website/trunk/en/running-a-mirror.wml
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--- website/trunk/en/running-a-mirror.wml	2009-05-07 17:25:21 UTC (rev 19472)
+++ website/trunk/en/running-a-mirror.wml	2009-05-07 17:29:57 UTC (rev 19473)
@@ -9,11 +9,13 @@
 <h2>Tor: Running a Mirror</h2>
 <hr />
 
-<p>Thanks for considering to be a mirror.  All of our mirrors are publicly
-listed on <a href="<page mirrors>">our mirrors page</a>.  You should
-expect around 500 page requests per day from users all over the world.
-The Tor website and distribution directory currently require 15GB of
-disk space.  The /dist directory alone is 3.6 GB.</p>
+<p>Thank you wanting to be a mirror of the Tor website.  All of our
+mirrors are publicly listed on <a href="<page mirrors>">our mirrors
+page</a>.  We've included some sample commands and configuration below
+to make the initial setup and ongoing maintenance a minimal effort. You
+should expect around 500 page requests per day from users all over the
+world.  The Tor website and distribution directory currently require
+15GB of disk space.  The /dist directory alone is 3.6 GB.</p>
 
 <p>
 If you would like to run a mirror, it's as easy as this command to download