[or-cvs] r18755: {website} cleanups on r18747 (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2009-03-03 01:42:18 -0500 (Tue, 03 Mar 2009)
New Revision: 18755

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml
Log:
cleanups on r18747


Modified: website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml
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--- website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml	2009-03-03 04:45:58 UTC (rev 18754)
+++ website/trunk/en/30seconds.wml	2009-03-03 06:42:18 UTC (rev 18755)
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 <p>Since 2001, the Tor Project has been developing free and
  open-source software that helps provide anonymity for Internet users. It works
 by allowing users
-to travel the web on a circuitous route over 1500 servers positioned
+to travel the web on a circuitous route over more than 1000 servers positioned
 around the world. When you use Tor, your route on the Internet is indirect,
 so snoops have a difficult time following your path and seizing vital
 information. Tor also has special functionality, called hidden services,
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@
 <li>Journalists who need to protect their sources</li>
 <li>Human rights workers</li>
 <li>Dissidents in politically rigid countries</li>
-<li>Corporations who wish to protect their employees web traffic</li>
+<li>Corporations who wish to protect their employees' web traffic</li>
 
 <li>Whistle blowers who fear retribution</li>
-<li>Governments wishing to protect their agents and employees traffic</li>
+<li>Governments wishing to protect their agents' and employees' traffic</li>
 <li>Law enforcement officers on Internet sting operations</li>
 <li>People wanting to post socially sensitive information in chat
 rooms, like rape or abuse survivors and those with stigmatized illnesses.</li>