[or-cvs] r15530: Clarify the wording of what one uses. (website/trunk/en)

phobos at seul.org phobos at seul.org
Fri Jun 27 23:37:20 UTC 2008


Author: phobos
Date: 2008-06-27 19:37:20 -0400 (Fri, 27 Jun 2008)
New Revision: 15530

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/donate.wml
Log:
Clarify the wording of what one uses.


Modified: website/trunk/en/donate.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2008-06-27 22:19:18 UTC (rev 15529)
+++ website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2008-06-27 23:37:20 UTC (rev 15530)
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 <hr />
 
 <p>
-If you use Tor and would like to help support The Tor Project, please
+If you use the Tor software or network and would like to help support The Tor Project, please
 consider making a donation to help us to continue our work.  We offer a
 few ways to make a donation:</p>
 <ul>



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