[or-cvs] r15399: fix some typos (website/trunk/en)

arma at seul.org arma at seul.org
Sun Jun 22 05:34:08 UTC 2008


Author: arma
Date: 2008-06-22 01:34:07 -0400 (Sun, 22 Jun 2008)
New Revision: 15399

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml
Log:
fix some typos


Modified: website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml	2008-06-22 05:29:17 UTC (rev 15398)
+++ website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml	2008-06-22 05:34:07 UTC (rev 15399)
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
 <p>
 Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the <a
 href="https://www.torproject.org/">Tor Project website</a>. We're currently
-working on ways to help users find, download and install a current version of
-Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect
+working on ways to help users find, download, and install a current version of
+Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect,
 but we hope that users will be able to find Tor indirectly if our website is
-blocked. If you're reading this from a search engines cache, directly from our
-website or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful.
+blocked. If you're reading this from a search engine's cache, directly from our
+website, or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful.
 Additionally, if you have ideas for how to improve these instructions, please
 <a href="<page contact>">contact us</a> and let us know.
 </p>
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@
 <h2>Fetching Tor with Tor: Using your web browser</h2>
 <hr />
 <p>
-If you're already running Tor, you're should be able to download a new Tor
+If you're already running Tor, you should be able to download a new Tor
 securely with your current Tor. You should do this for your friends who don't
 already have Tor. You can do this from our <a href="<page download>">download
 page</a> or from a download page on one of the many Tor <a href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a>.
-Plese take care to  <a
+Please take care to <a
 href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify
 the signature</a> of any downloaded package when possible.
 </p>
@@ -36,14 +36,14 @@
 A Tor mirror is a site that contains an exact copy of our main site.
 People who cannot reach the Tor website are encouraged to visit our <a
 href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a> to download copies of our source code as well
-as binary builds for their specifically desired platforms. You may want to use
+as binary builds for their desired platforms. You may want to use
 a search engine to find mirrors if our mirror page is blocked or seemingly
-unresponsive. It is very imporant to <a
+unresponsive. It is very important to <a
 href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify
 the cryptographic signatures</a> of our software when using any mirror. We
 cannot ensure the safety or security of any package hosted on remote mirrors
-without a signature. It's probably safe but a cautious user should check
-signatures if possible.
+without a signature. It's probably safe, but a cautious user should check
+signatures when possible.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Fetching Tor via email: gettor</h2>



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