[or-cvs] r15939: Some corrections to mid-July report. Thanks phobos! (website/trunk/projects/en)

[kloesing at seul.org]

Author: kloesing
Date: 2008-07-15 08:40:01 -0400 (Tue, 15 Jul 2008)
New Revision: 15939

Modified:
   website/trunk/projects/en/hidserv.wml
Log:
Some corrections to mid-July report. Thanks phobos!

Modified: website/trunk/projects/en/hidserv.wml
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--- website/trunk/projects/en/hidserv.wml	2008-07-15 12:21:28 UTC (rev 15938)
+++ website/trunk/projects/en/hidserv.wml	2008-07-15 12:40:01 UTC (rev 15939)
@@ -198,17 +198,17 @@
   <td>
     <small><em>All bugs that have been found in the analysis have been
     fixed. This includes the 2 bugs that have already been fixed during the
-    analysis and 4 more that could be fixed within the last month. While
+    analysis and 4 more bugs that were fixed within the past 30 days. While
     the bugfixes remove unintended performance bottlenecks due to
     programming errors, some of the design changes that have been spotted
     in the previous analysis have side-effects on anonymity or overall
-    network load which need to be weighed up against individual performance
+    network load which need to be evaluated against individual performance
     gains. A <a href="http://freehaven.net/~karsten/hidserv/discussion-2008-07-15.pdf">report</a>
     has been published to the
     <a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/dev/Jul-2008/msg00034.html">developer
     mailing list</a> including 7 possible design changes that need to be
     discussed. Some evaluations (namely Low-Bandwidth Measurements and the
-    Grand Scaling Plan) had to be scheduled for a later time in the
+    Grand Scaling Plan) will be scheduled for a later time in the
     project. Although the current plan is to perform these evaluations
     within the timeframe until January 15, it is unlikely that their
     results can be applied in the schedule of this project.</em></small>