[or-cvs] r15933: simplify simplify (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2008-07-15 05:02:17 -0400 (Tue, 15 Jul 2008)
New Revision: 15933

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml
Log:
simplify simplify


Modified: website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml
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--- website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml	2008-07-15 08:27:28 UTC (rev 15932)
+++ website/trunk/en/finding-tor.wml	2008-07-15 09:02:17 UTC (rev 15933)
@@ -7,12 +7,10 @@
 <h1>Tor: Finding Tor</h1>
 <hr />
 <p>
-Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the Tor Project website. 
-We're currently
-working on ways to help users find, download, and install a current version of
-Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect,
-but we hope that users will be able to find Tor indirectly if our website is
-blocked. If you're reading this from a search engine's cache, directly from our
+Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the Tor Project website. Here
+are some ways that you can find and download a current version of
+Tor if our website is blocked in your area. If you're reading this from
+a search engine's cache, directly from our
 website, or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful.
 Additionally, if you have ideas for how to improve these instructions, please
 <a href="<page contact>">contact us</a> and let us know.
@@ -33,38 +31,39 @@
 <h2>With a little help from our friends: Using Mirrors</h2>
 <hr />
 <p>
-A Tor mirror is a site that contains an exact copy of our main site.
-People who cannot reach the Tor website are encouraged to visit our <a
-href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a> to download copies of our source code as well
-as binary builds for their desired platforms. You may want to use
-a search engine to find mirrors if our mirror page is blocked or seemingly
-unresponsive. It is very important to <a
+A Tor mirror is a website that contains an exact copy of our main site.
+We have <a
+href="<page mirrors>">several dozen mirrors</a> currently, and you
+can find the list by searching for "Tor mirrors" on your favorite
+search engine.
+</p>
+
+<p>
+It is very important to <a
 href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify
-the cryptographic signatures</a> of our software when using any mirror. We
+the cryptographic signatures</a> on the Tor software when using any mirror. We
 cannot ensure the safety or security of any package hosted on remote mirrors
 without a signature. It's probably safe, but a cautious user should check
 signatures when possible.
 </p>
 
-<h2>Fetching Tor via email: gettor</h2>
+<h2>Fetching Tor via Gmail: gettor</h2>
 <hr />
 <p>
-It is possible to get a copy of Tor by sending an email to a special
-email address: '<tt>gettor AT torproject.org</tt>'. Now anyone who can
-send email can get a copy of Tor. Currently, we only support mail systems
-that we know don't mind large email attachments. Gmail and Yahoo! mail are
-two such mail services that are known to work. A user only needs to send
-us a request with 'help' in the body of the email, and instructions will be
-sent as a reply.
+It is possible to get a copy of Tor by sending an email to a special email
+address: '<tt>gettor AT torproject.org</tt>'. Now anyone who can send
+email can get a copy of Tor. A user only needs to send us a request with
+'help' in the body of the email, and instructions will be sent as a reply.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 To avoid spamming people accidentally, we only answer emails that are sent
 from email services that support <a href="http://www.dkim.org/">DKIM</a>,
-which is an email feature that lets us verify that the sender in the
-"From" line is actually the one who sent the mail. If we get an email from
-a service that doesn't use DKIM, we'll send a short note and then ignore
-the email address for the next day or so.
+which is an email feature that lets us verify that the address in the
+"From" line is actually the one who sent the mail. Gmail and Yahoo! mail
+are two such mail services that are known to work. If we get an email
+from a service that doesn't use DKIM, we'll send a short explanation
+and then ignore the email address for the next day or so.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Fetching Tor via IRC: gettor</h2>