[or-cvs] r10101: clean up grammar on the donate page (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-05-03 06:23:43 -0400 (Thu, 03 May 2007)
New Revision: 10101

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/donate.wml
Log:
clean up grammar on the donate page


Modified: website/trunk/en/donate.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2007-05-03 10:15:50 UTC (rev 10100)
+++ website/trunk/en/donate.wml	2007-05-03 10:23:43 UTC (rev 10101)
@@ -15,12 +15,12 @@
 
 <p>As of December 2006, Tor is a US 501[c][3] research/educational
 nonprofit.  Donations to the Tor Project may be tax deductible to persons
-in the US, or who pay taxes in countries with reciprocity with the US
-on charitable donations.
+who are in the US or who pay taxes in countries with reciprocity with
+the US on charitable donations.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Checks, money orders and postal orders can be sent to:<br>
+Checks, money orders, and postal orders can be sent to:<br>
 <blocktext>
 The Tor Project<br>
 56 Waterhouse Street #1<br>