[or-cvs] tweak the gui index page

[arma at seul.org]

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website/gui
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/website/gui

Modified Files:
	index.html 
Log Message:
tweak the gui index page


Index: index.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/gui/index.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10
--- index.html	10 Sep 2005 07:13:49 -0000	1.9
+++ index.html	13 Sep 2005 14:39:53 -0000	1.10
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 Tor is a decentralized network of computers on the Internet that increases
 privacy in Web browsing, instant messaging, and other applications. We
 estimate there are some 50,000 Tor users currently, routing their traffic
-through about 250 volunteer Tor servers on five continents. However, Tor's
+through about 250 volunteer Tor servers on six continents. However, Tor's
 current user interface approach — running as a service in the background
 — does a poor job of communicating network status and security levels
 to the user.
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
 <p>Submitters will produce either sketches for a suggested user interface,
 or a work of <a
 href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open Source Software</a>
-that will provide a user interface to the Tor system by way of the 
+that will provide a user interface to the Tor system by way of the
 <a href="/cvs/control/doc/howto.txt">Tor Controller Protocol</a>.</p>
 
 <p>We are looking for a vision of how Tor can work in a user's everyday
@@ -121,9 +121,8 @@
 <li>Allow the user to fully configure Tor rather than manually searching
 for and opening text files.</li>
 <li>Let users learn about the current state of their Tor connection
-(including which servers they are connected to, and how many connections
-they have), and find out whether any of their applications are using
-it.</li>
+(for example, how well the current Tor connection is working),
+and find out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>
 <li>Make alerts and error conditions visible to the user.</li>
 <li>Run on at least one of Windows, Linux, and OS&nbsp;X, on a
 not-unusually-configured consumer-level machine.</li>