[or-cvs] tor-doc-win32.html: Changed win32 to "MS Windows" so more n...

Thu Jun 9 02:14:34 UTC 2005

Update of /home/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria:/tmp/cvs-serv20940

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-osx.html tor-doc-win32.html 
Log Message:
tor-doc-win32.html: Changed win32 to "MS Windows" so more non-technical people will
understand it.
tor-doc-osx.html:  Changed instructions to match screenshots (localhost
vs. 127.0.0.1)


Index: tor-doc-osx.html
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--- tor-doc-osx.html	6 Jun 2005 14:54:19 -0000	1.28
+++ tor-doc-osx.html	9 Jun 2005 02:14:32 -0000	1.29
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
   server" section at <a href="tor-doc.html#server">tor-doc.html</a>.</b>
 </p>
 <p>
-This document was updated May 23 2005.
+This document was updated June 08 2005.
 </p>
 <p>
 The latest beta release of Tor for Macintosh OS X is <a
@@ -99,8 +99,8 @@
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-osx-proxy-settings.png"
 border="1">
 
-<p>Select and enter localhost and port 8118 for both Web Proxy (HTTP)
-and your Secure Web Proxy (HTTPS)</p>
+<p>Select and enter 127.0.0.1 and port 8118 for both Web Proxy (HTTP)
+and your Secure Web Proxy (HTTPS).  Leave your Use Passive FTP Mode (PASV) setting as is.</p>
 
 <p>Using privoxy is <strong>necessary</strong> because <a
 href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#SOCKSAndDNS">browsers

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--- tor-doc-win32.html	6 Jun 2005 14:54:19 -0000	1.44
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	9 Jun 2005 02:14:32 -0000	1.45
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <html>
 <head>
-<title>Tor Win32 Install Instructions</title>
+<title>Tor MS Windows Install Instructions</title>
 <meta name="Author" content="Roger Dingledine">
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8">
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Style-Type" content="text/css">
@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@
 
 <body>
 
-<h1>Running the <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> client on Win32</h1>
+<h1>Running the <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> client on MS Windows</h1>
 
 <a name="installing"></a>
 <h2>Step One: Download and Install Tor</h2>
 <p>
-<b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a client on Win32.
+<b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a client on MS Windows (2000, XP, Server)
 If you want to run a server (please do), read the "Configuring a server" section at
 <a href="tor-doc.html#server">tor-doc.html</a>.</b>
 </p>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 This document was updated May 23 2005.
 </p>
 <p>
-The latest beta release of Tor for Windows 32 is
+The latest beta release of Tor for MS Windows is
 <a href="http://tor.eff.org/dist/win32/tor-0.1.0.8-rc-win32.exe">0.1.0.8-rc</a>.
 Download it by clicking the link. You may be able to find experimental versions
 <a href="http://tor.eff.org/dist/win32/">here</a>, if you're looking for
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
 <p>After installing Tor, you need to configure your applications to use it.
 The first step is to set up web browsing. Start by installing <a
 href="http://www.privoxy.org/">Privoxy</a> (click on 'recent releases',
-then scroll down to the Win32 installer packages). Privoxy is a filtering
+then scroll down to the MS Windows installer packages). Privoxy is a filtering
 web proxy that integrates well with Tor. Once it's installed, it should
 appear in your system tray as a "P" in a circle, as pictured below:
 </p>

