[or-cvs] clean up the docs another round

Wed Jul 20 19:38:59 UTC 2005

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-osx.html tor-doc-win32.html tor-switchproxy.html 
Log Message:
clean up the docs another round


Index: tor-doc-osx.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-osx.html,v
retrieving revision 1.37
retrieving revision 1.38
diff -u -d -r1.37 -r1.38

--- tor-doc-osx.html	20 Jul 2005 00:00:08 -0000	1.37
+++ tor-doc-osx.html	20 Jul 2005 19:38:56 -0000	1.38
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>If you don't know your current public IP address, this may not be a
-very useful test. To learn your IP address, run <tt>ifconfig</tt>.
+very useful test. To learn your IP address, run "<tt>ifconfig</tt>".
 If you are behind a NAT or firewall, though, you won't be able
 to learn your public IP address. In this case, you should 1) configure
 your browser to connect directly (that is, stop using Privoxy), 2) check
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
 to Privoxy, and 4) see whether your IP address has changed.
 </p>
 
-<p> If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
+<p>If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
 ability to connect to itself, be sure to allow connections from
 your local applications to local port 8118 and port 9050. If
 your firewall blocks outgoing connections, punch a hole so
@@ -166,6 +166,10 @@
 FAQ entry</a>.
 </p>
 
+<p>If it's still not working, look at <a
+href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ItDoesntWork">this
+FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
+
 <a name="uninstall"></a>
 <h2>How To Uninstall Tor and Privoxy</h2>
 

Index: tor-doc-win32.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-win32.html,v
retrieving revision 1.65
retrieving revision 1.66
diff -u -d -r1.65 -r1.66
--- tor-doc-win32.html	20 Jul 2005 00:59:41 -0000	1.65
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	20 Jul 2005 19:38:56 -0000	1.66
@@ -197,15 +197,15 @@
 
 <p>If you don't know your current public IP address, this may not be a
 very useful test. To learn your IP address, go to the Start menu, click
-Run and enter <tt>cmd</tt>. At the command prompt, enter <tt>ipconfig
-/a</tt>. If you are behind a NAT or firewall, though, you won't be able
+Run and enter "<tt>cmd</tt>". At the command prompt, enter "<tt>ipconfig
+/a</tt>". If you are behind a NAT or firewall, though, you won't be able
 to learn your public IP address. In this case, you should 1) configure
 your browser to connect directly (that is, stop using Privoxy), 2) check
 your IP address with one of the sites above, 3) point your browser back
 to Privoxy, and 4) see whether your IP address has changed.
 </p>
 
-<p> If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
+<p>If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
 ability to connect to itself, be sure to allow connections from
 your local applications to local port 8118 and port 9050. If
 your firewall blocks outgoing connections, punch a hole so
@@ -214,6 +214,10 @@
 FAQ entry</a>.
 </p>
 
+<p>If it's still not working, look at <a
+href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ItDoesntWork">this
+FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
+
 <hr />
 
 <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please post

Index: tor-switchproxy.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-switchproxy.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- tor-switchproxy.html	20 Jul 2005 01:27:17 -0000	1.8
+++ tor-switchproxy.html	20 Jul 2005 19:38:56 -0000	1.9
@@ -90,8 +90,8 @@
 <img alt="firefox plugin warning"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-plugin-starting.jpg" />
 
-<p>Once the installer is finished, you should close all of your FireFox
-windows and restart the program.</p>
+<p>Once the installer is finished, you should close all of your Firefox
+windows and restart Firefox.</p>
 
 <img alt="firefox plugin finished"
 src="http://tor.eff.org/img/screenshot-switchproxy-plugin-finished.jpg" />
@@ -147,9 +147,12 @@
 <a name="two"></a>
 <h3>Step Three: Check if it works</h3>
 
+<p>Now Firefox is using Privoxy as an HTTP proxy, Privoxy is using Tor as
+a socks4a proxy, and Tor is making your connections to the Internet.</p>
+
 <p>In the above example, it was clear that it worked because the web
 page showed up in a different language. In other cases, though,
-you'll want to verify that your Tor is working. Do
+you'll want to verify that your setup is working. Do
 <a href="http://tor.eff.org/doc/tor-doc-win32.html#verify">step four</a>
 of the Windows Tor installation howto, or
 <a href="http://tor.eff.org/doc/tor-doc-osx.html#verify">step three</a>

