[or-cvs] clean up tor website further
Roger Dingledine
arma at seul.org
Tue Dec 14 23:44:45 UTC 2004
Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/website
Modified Files:
documentation.html download.html howitworks.html overview.html
Log Message:
clean up tor website further
lower-case some headings
Index: documentation.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/documentation.html,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -d -r1.7 -r1.8
--- documentation.html 9 Dec 2004 21:33:03 -0000 1.7
+++ documentation.html 14 Dec 2004 23:44:42 -0000 1.8
@@ -42,9 +42,11 @@
to Tor-ifying various applications</a>
</p>
+<!--
<p>
<a href="">What are the command-line and torrc config options?</a>
</p>
+-->
<p>
<a href="http://wiki.noreply.org/wiki/TheOnionRouter_2fTorInChroot">Running Tor
Index: download.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/download.html,v
retrieving revision 1.34
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -d -r1.34 -r1.35
--- download.html 13 Dec 2004 19:27:41 -0000 1.34
+++ download.html 14 Dec 2004 23:44:42 -0000 1.35
@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@
</p>
<p><b>Red Hat packages</b> are not available yet. We have a <a
-href="cvs/tor/tor.spec.in">spec file</a> but we're not sure if it's any
-good. Please help.
+href="cvs/tor/tor.spec.in">spec file</a>, and we plan to start making
+rpms available soon.
</p>
<p><b>Debian packages</b> have been uploaded to unstable,
Index: howitworks.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/howitworks.html,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -d -r1.10 -r1.11
--- howitworks.html 14 Dec 2004 07:20:20 -0000 1.10
+++ howitworks.html 14 Dec 2004 23:44:42 -0000 1.11
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
<h2>Tor: How it works</h2>
<p>
-<a href="overview.html">Basic Tor Overview</a>: what Tor provides, why it
+<a href="overview.html">Basic Tor overview</a>: what Tor provides, why it
matters, how it works.
</p>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
configuring, and running Tor</a>.
</p>
-<p>The <b>Design Document</b> (published at Usenix
+<p>The <b>design document</b> (published at Usenix
Security 2004) gives our justifications and security analysis for the
Tor design:</p>
<ul>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
<li><a href="cvs/tor/doc/design-paper/tor-design.html">HTML version</a></li>
</ul>
-<p>The <b>Specification</b> aims to give
+<p>The <b>specification</b> aims to give
developers enough information to build a compatible version of Tor:</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-spec.txt">Main Tor specification</a></li>
Index: overview.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.15
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diff -u -d -r1.15 -r1.16
--- overview.html 14 Dec 2004 07:20:20 -0000 1.15
+++ overview.html 14 Dec 2004 23:44:42 -0000 1.16
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
the more your anonymity will be protected.
</p>
-<h3>Why We Need Tor</h3>
+<h3>Why we need Tor</h3>
<p>
Using Tor protects you against a common form of Internet surveillance
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
different organizations and individuals.
</p>
-<h3>The Solution: a Distributed, Anonymous Network</h3>
+<h3>The solution: a distributed, anonymous network</h3>
<p>
Tor helps to reduce the risks of both simple and sophisticated traffic
@@ -128,9 +128,11 @@
that each hop can't see what these connections are as they pass through.
</p>
+<!--
<p>
[Insert snazzy onion diagram here.]
</p>
+-->
<p>
Once a circuit has been established, many kinds of data can be exchanged
@@ -149,7 +151,7 @@
ones.
</p>
-<h3>Hidden Services</h3>
+<h3>Hidden services</h3>
<p>
Tor also makes it possible for users to hide their locations while
@@ -162,7 +164,7 @@
the site, and nobody who offered the site would know who was posting to it.
</p>
-<h3>Staying Anonymous</h3>
+<h3>Staying anonymous</h3>
<p>
Of course, Tor can't solve all anonymity problems. It focuses only on
@@ -183,7 +185,7 @@
discover that they are part of the same circuit.
</p>
-<h3>The Future of Tor</h3>
+<h3>The future of Tor</h3>
<p>
Providing a usable anonymizing network on the Internet today is an
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