[or-cvs] clean up last paragraph of overview

[Roger Dingledine]

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/website

Modified Files:
	overview.html 
Log Message:
clean up last paragraph of overview


Index: overview.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -d -r1.13 -r1.14
--- overview.html	13 Dec 2004 03:56:29 -0000	1.13
+++ overview.html	13 Dec 2004 19:16:23 -0000	1.14
@@ -201,13 +201,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Anonymity is threatened as never before by trends in law, policy, and
-technology that are undermining our ability to speak and read freely
-online without being forced to reveal who we are. These trends also
-undermine national security and critical infrastructures by making
-personal, corporate, organization, and government communications more
-vulnerable. With each new user and server, we enhance Tor's ability
-to restore your control over your security and privacy.
+Ongoing trends in law, policy, and technology threaten anonymity as never
+before, undermining our ability to speak and read freely online. These
+trends also undermine national security and critical infrastructure by
+making communication among individuals, organizations, corporations,
+and governments more vulnerable to analysis. Each new user and server
+provides additional diversity, enhancing Tor's ability to put control
+over your security and privacy back into your hands.
 </p>
 
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