[tor-bugs] #33035 [Applications/Tor Browser]: create strings for onion service error pages

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#33035: create strings for onion service error pages
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 Reporter:  brade                     |          Owner:  tbb-team
     Type:  defect                    |         Status:  new
 Priority:  Medium                    |      Milestone:
Component:  Applications/Tor Browser  |        Version:
 Severity:  Normal                    |     Resolution:
 Keywords:  ux-team                   |  Actual Points:  0.25
Parent ID:  #19251                    |         Points:
 Reviewer:                            |        Sponsor:  Sponsor27-must
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Comment (by antonela):

 Replying to [comment:19 brade]:
 > I'm not sure how best to discuss possible improvements to the strings
 using the OnlyOffice spreadsheet, so I'm going to comment here.
 >
 It is a collaborative document, so you should be able to click and comment
 or edit. Shared documents seem to be the best way to approach
 collaborative work. Especially to discuss content.

 > Can we use "Onionsite" for the less technical text and "onion service
 descriptor" for the technical text (long description)?  For example the
 tab titles could be "Problem Loading Onionsite".  For XF0, the error title
 could be "Onionsite Not Found".
 >
 Works for me.

 > Do we want to include the error code in the Long Description?
 >
 Yes, we do.

 > Mark and I also have some suggested word-smithing for the Error Title
 and the Short Description. We tried to provide a unique title so users can
 distinguish among the errors at a glance, and we tried to add some
 guidance to lead the user toward possible next steps ("Contact the
 onionsite administrator"). Here's what we came up with:
 >
 > ||='''Code'''=||='''Error Title'''=||='''Short Description''=||
 > ||XF0||Onionsite Not Found||The most likely cause is that the onionsite
 is offline or disabled. Contact the onionsite administrator.||
 > ||XF1||Onionsite Cannot Be Reached||The onionsite is unreachable due to
 an internal error.||
 > ||XF2||Onionsite Has Disconnected||The most likely cause is that the
 onionsite is offline or disabled. Contact the onionsite administrator.||
 > ||XF3||Unable to Connect to Onionsite||The onionsite is busy or the Tor
 network is overloaded.  Try again later.||
 > ||XF4||Onionsite Requires Authentication||Access to the onionsite
 requires a key but none was provided.||
 > ||XF5||Onionsite Authentication Failed||The provided key is incorrect or
 has been revoked.  Contact the onionsite administrator.||
 > ||XF6||Invalid Onionsite Address||The provided onionsite address is
 invalid.  Please check that you entered it correctly.||
 > ||XF7||Onionsite Circuit Creation Timed Out||Failed to connect to the
 onionsite, possibly due to a poor network connection.||
 >

 Looks good for me. Do we need any other reviewers?

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