[tor-bugs] #27541 [Webpages/Blog]: small nits for the Android blog post

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#27541: small nits for the Android blog post
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 Reporter:  traumschule    |          Owner:  hiro
     Type:  defect         |         Status:  new
 Priority:  Medium         |      Milestone:
Component:  Webpages/Blog  |        Version:
 Severity:  Normal         |     Resolution:
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Comment (by sysrqb):

 Thanks for these!

 Replying to [ticket:27541 traumschule]:
 > [https://blog.torproject.org/new-alpha-release-tor-browser-android This]
 is an awesome post! Just small remarks:
 >
 > 1)
 > The download link goes to the void and the page has issues
 (comment:14:ticket:27305). Could you link to
 https://www.torproject.org/projects/torbrowser.html.en#downloads-alpha?
 > We can change it back later with the next release.

 Yeah, good catch. I'll correct this.

 >
 > 2)
 > > "All anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see is that you’re
 using Tor."
 > probably should be
 > > "Anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see that you’re using
 Tor."
 >
 > 3) i'd add a sentence to RESIST FINGERPRINTING after
 > > "Tor aims to make all users look the same, so Tor Browser for Android
 makes it difficult for you to be fingerprinted based on your browser and
 device information."
 > saying
 > > At the moment Tor Browser users share OS specific fingerprints. We are
 working to improve this in the future.

 I'm guessing you're referring to #26146.  Unfortunately, we'll likely
 continue specifying Android in the UAS. Mobile browsing is too different
 from desktop, and usually relies on the user agent.

 >
 > 4)
 > > "When you use Tor Browser for Android, your traffic is relayed and
 encrypted three times as it passes over the Tor network."
 > "travels through" or "is transmitted over"?
 >
 > 5)
 > > Orfox will sunsetted
 > "Orfox will be sunsetted"

 Thanks!

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