[tor-bugs] #27214 [Applications/Tor Browser]: Update descriptions for onboarding

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#27214: Update descriptions for onboarding
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 Reporter:  gk                             |          Owner:  tbb-team
     Type:  defect                         |         Status:  new
 Priority:  High                           |      Milestone:
Component:  Applications/Tor Browser       |        Version:
 Severity:  Normal                         |     Resolution:
 Keywords:  ux-team, TorBrowserTeam201808  |  Actual Points:
Parent ID:  #26962                         |         Points:
 Reviewer:                                 |        Sponsor:
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Comment (by isabela):

 Ok, I edited the circuit display copy and added to the list:
 https://pad.riseup.net/p/tba-alpha-onboarding

 I also asked if we could have a button for the display that takes the user
 to the next screen on onboarding, security. So the experience is a bit
 more consistent.

 Replying to [comment:12 isabela]:


 > Hi there!
 >
 > it has been a mistake :) the pad steph shared has the copy we did for
 mobile, there is why circuit display one is not there because it won't
 ship with this alpha.
 >
 > I didn't know about this ticket, so I was planing to wait for the mobile
 allpha to be launched and then work on having the same copy for both
 platforms (change desktop).
 >
 > If you would like to update desktop with what is in the pad, you can go
 for it! But I still need to update the circuit display copy because it is
 still the same as it is in the desktop. BTW that is the only step we
 removed from the onboarding.
 >
 > Replying to [comment:11 gk]:
 >
 >
 >
 > > Replying to [comment:8 mcs]:
 > >
 > >
 > > > Replying to [comment:7 steph]:
 > > >
 > > >
 > > > > I think we're set on the cut down and edited text in the pad.
 > > > >
 > > > >
 > > >
 > > > Ah, okay. Who is going to merge those strings into the desktop
 Torbutton? Or are they already somewhere? I have not had time to pay
 attention to what has been going on for TBA :(
 > > >
 > > >
 > >
 > > The strings are not in Torbutton yet as we should double-check whether
 we have everything first (and it seems you found something missing
 already). I think the process is:
 > >
 > > 1) isa/steph post the final strings (in this case the missing circuit
 display ones)
 > > 2) you create a patch for updated strings
 > > 3) I'll look at it and merge them to Torbutton.
 > >
 > > Should be doable today, I think.

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