[tor-bugs] #24574 [Webpages/Website]: Pull request: Use English "singular they" at a few places

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#24574: Pull request: Use English "singular they" at a few places
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 Reporter:  iblech            |          Owner:  (none)
     Type:  defect            |         Status:  needs_revision
 Priority:  Low               |      Milestone:
Component:  Webpages/Website  |        Version:
 Severity:  Normal            |     Resolution:
 Keywords:                    |  Actual Points:
Parent ID:                    |         Points:
 Reviewer:                    |        Sponsor:
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Changes (by catalyst):

 * status:  new => needs_revision


Comment:

 I approve of this approach.  The changes look reasonable to me.  I haven't
 verified whether they're exhaustive.

 It could use a minor revision:
 "watches traffic at both ends of a circuit and confirms their guess that
 they're communicating" probably should be reworded to something like
 "watches traffic at both ends of a circuit and confirms their guess that
 those endpoints are communicating" to avoid ambiguity.

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