[tor-bugs] #5811 [Tor Support]: Translate the TSUM into human and improve section organization

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#5811: Translate the TSUM into human and improve section organization
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 Reporter:  mikeperry    |          Owner:  runa
     Type:  defect       |         Status:  new 
 Priority:  normal       |      Milestone:      
Component:  Tor Support  |        Version:      
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Comment(by mikeperry):

 One way to improve things is to sit down with your densest, most computer-
 illiterate relatives and keep changing things until they seem to get it. I
 went through this process with https://www.torproject.org/download
 /download-easy.html#warning and it seemed to help dramatically improve it.
 See
 http://web.archive.org/web/20110624000303/http://www.torproject.org/download/download.html.en
 for what I started with.

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