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=== https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/TorWeeklyNews/2014/22 ===
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version 9
Author: mttp
Date:   2014-05-30T20:05:18+00:00

   grammar

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 Sometimes users with no network obstacles will email the help desk to ask
-how to configure their Tor Browser. Often, these users will not need to 
-configure anything, and click 'Connect' is all that is necessary. Discussion 
-on this problem is taking place on the bug tracker [XXX].
+how to configure their Tor Browser. Often these users will not need to 
+configure anything, and clicking 'Connect' is all that is necessary. 
+Discussion on this problem is taking place on the bug tracker [XXX].
 
 [XXX]: https://bugs.torproject.org/12164
 

version 8
Author: mttp
Date:   2014-05-30T20:03:43+00:00

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 Tor help desk roundup
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-Summary of some questions sent to the Tor help desk. 
+Sometimes users with no network obstacles will email the help desk to ask
+how to configure their Tor Browser. Often, these users will not need to 
+configure anything, and click 'Connect' is all that is necessary. Discussion 
+on this problem is taking place on the bug tracker [XXX].
+
+[XXX]: https://bugs.torproject.org/12164
 
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