[TWN team] Recent changes to the wiki pages

Lunar lunar at torproject.org
Mon Mar 10 15:00:07 UTC 2014 

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version 33
Author: harmony
Date:   2014-03-10T14:11:45+00:00

   add comment

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+++ version 33
@@ -153,4 +153,4 @@
 
 Possible items:
 
- * Tails gets a prize https://twitter.com/accessnow/status/441043400708857856 (better find other sources than a tweet though)
+ * Tails gets a prize https://twitter.com/accessnow/status/441043400708857856 (better find other sources than a tweet though) (maybe we should postpone this to next week if no more information emerges? no one awards $50K and then never mentions it again - harmony)

version 32
Author: harmony
Date:   2014-03-10T14:09:31+00:00

   play it safe with gender (unless i'm missing something)

--- version 31
+++ version 32
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006400.html
 
-Alex reported [XXX] on his efforts to use ScrambleSuit [XXX] with OpenVPN.
+Alex reported [XXX] on an effort to use ScrambleSuit [XXX] with OpenVPN.
 Ultimately, Yawning Angel identified a flaw in OpenVPN implementation of the
 SOCKS protocol [XXX] and even wrote a patch for it [XXX].
 

version 31
Author: harmony
Date:   2014-03-10T14:07:32+00:00

   small language/reference fixes

--- version 30
+++ version 31
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 New release of tor-ramdisk
 --------------------------
 
-On March 9th, Anthony G. Basile has released [XXX] a new version of
+On March 9th, Anthony G. Basile released [XXX] a new version of
 tor-ramdisk [XXX]. Tor-ramdisk is a “micro Linux distribution whose only
 purpose is to host a Tor server in an environment that maximizes
 security and privacy. Security is enhanced by hardening the kernel and
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 information survives a reboot […].”
 
 The new version contains Tor 2.4.21 and an updated kernel. The main
-changes is the addition of “haveged, a daemon to help generate entropy
+change is the addition of “haveged, a daemon to help generate entropy
 on diskless systems, for a more cryptographically sound system”.
 
  [XXX]: http://opensource.dyc.edu/pipermail/tor-ramdisk/2014-March/000127.html
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
 
 The wave of regular monthly reports from Tor project members for the
 month of February continued, with Isis Lovecruft [XXX], Andrew
-Lewman [XXX], Matt Pagan [XXX], Kevin P. Dyer [XXX] releasing their
+Lewman [XXX], Matt Pagan [XXX], and Kevin P. Dyer [XXX] releasing their
 reports this week.
 
-The Tails developers also reported on their recent progress [XXX].
-Roger Dingledine sent the report for SponsorF [XXX].
+The Tails developers also reported on their recent progress [XXX], and
+Roger Dingledine sent out the report for SponsorF [XXX].
 
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-reports/2014-March/000479.html
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-reports/2014-March/000480.html
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 Miscellaneous news
 ------------------
 
-Tails has issued the call for testing for its 0.23 release [XXX]. At least
+Tails issued the call for testing for its 0.23 release [XXX]. At the very least,
 the long awaited features that are MAC spoofing and bridge integration would
 benefit from wider testing. Enthusiasts are encouraged to report their
 findings [XXX] on the newly created tails-tester mailing list [XXX].
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
  [XXX]: https://mailman.boum.org/pipermail/tails-testers/2014-March/000000.html
  [XXX]: https://tails.boum.org/news/tails-testers/
 
-Nick Mathewson called anyone who wanted to make Tor relays 3 to 10% faster
+Nick Mathewson called on anyone who wanted to make Tor relays 3 to 10% faster
 to review his patches. Have a look at #9683 [XXX] and #9841 [XXX] if you want
 to help out.
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2014-March/000483.html
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2014-March/000484.html
 
-Karsten Loesing has sent the minutes of the March 5th Weather rewrite
+Karsten Loesing sent out the minutes of the March 5th Weather rewrite
 online meeting [XXX].
 
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006400.html
@@ -83,15 +83,15 @@
 Ultimately, Yawning Angel identified a flaw in OpenVPN implementation of the
 SOCKS protocol [XXX] and even wrote a patch for it [XXX].
 
+ [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006394.html 
  [XXX]: http://www.cs.kau.se/philwint/scramblesuit/
- [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006394.html
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006427.html
  [XXX]: https://github.com/Yawning/openvpn/commit/7474f1acfc
 
-Sebastian Urbach announced [XXX] that the Trying Trusted Tor Traceroutes [XXX]
-has “reached 100 completed runs from different ip's (not to mention the
+Sebastian Urbach announced [XXX] that Trying Trusted Tor Traceroutes [XXX]
+has “reached 100 completed runs from different ip’s (not to mention the
 multiple runs).” To all participating relay operators, he added: “Thank you
-very much for your support, you officially rock !”
+very much for your support, you officially rock!”
 
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-relays/2014-March/004037.html
  [XXX]: http://web.engr.illinois.edu/~das17/tor-traceroute_v1.html
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
 
 Erinn Clark discovered [XXX] another fake OpenPGP key with her name and email
 address. Watch out! The canonical list of keys used for Tor signatures [XXX] is
-still available on the Tor Project's website. Also consider verifying all
+still available on the Tor Project’s website. Also consider verifying all
 signatures [XXX] for the reproducible Tor Browser Bundles [XXX].
 
  [XXX]: https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2014-March/006422.html
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 Tor help desk roundup
 ---------------------
 
-Users have asked us why 'About TorBrowser' in the Tor Browser's 
+Users have asked us why “About TorBrowser” in the Tor Browser’s 
 Help menu displays the Firefox Logo instead of the Tor logo. 
 This has been a known issue for some time, and fixing it is 
 not as easy it would seem. Relevant bug tickets here are 



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