[TWN team] Help desk roundup
harmony
harmony01 at riseup.net
Tue Jun 24 22:07:37 UTC 2014
Matt Pagan:
> I think it could still work because Roger's Internet days talk is kind
> of old and 28C3 was some time ago now. Even though they are a little
> old, they remain good resources.
>
> Maybe saying "are still good resources" also works though? Or "are good
> resources"?
I think it will be fine for next week. I had no trouble understanding the
intent of the paragraph, although the connection between the technical and
ethical bits should be clearer:
The help desk has been asked about the “ethics” behind Tor. Tor’s technical
design decisions are laid out in the various design documents [XXX], but
to understand the social and cultural motivations for the Tor Project,
videos
like Roger’s talk at Internet Days [XXX], or Jake and Roger’s talks at the
Chaos Communications Congress in 2011 [XXX] and 2013 [XXX] remain good
resources.
Maybe like that?
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