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=== https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/TorWeeklyNews/2013/25 ===
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version 23
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-21T21:35:11+00:00

   fix own language

--- version 22
+++ version 23
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 that look in practice?”
 
 If you are attending the Congress, feel free to come along and participate
-in these sessions, or catch up with the talks online after the event.
+in these sessions; if not, you can catch up with the talks online after the event.
 
  [XXX] https://www.ccc.de/en/updates/2013/30c3
  [XXX] https://media.torproject.org/video/29c3-5306-en-the_tor_software_ecosystem_h264.mp4

version 22
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-21T21:32:56+00:00

   add other mirror/language fixes

--- version 21
+++ version 22
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
 After more than a year of work, Mike Perry has officialy blessed the 3.5
 release of the Tor Browser Bundle as the new stable release [XXX].
-Compared to the previous stable series, it features a deterministic
+Improving on the previous stable series, it features a deterministic
 build system [XXX] for distributed trust [XXX], a new integrated
 interface to interact with Tor [XXX] and all the improvements from Tor
 0.2.4 [XXX]. 
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
 With the discontinuation of Firefox 17 ESR, the new release
 had to be pushed to users to avoid exposing them to security holes.
 Firefox 24 ESR, on which the Tor Browser is now based, should be
-supported by Mozilla for approximately one year. This should leave our
+supported by Mozilla for approximately one year. This will leave our
 browser hackers some time to focus more on user experience improvements,
 test automation, and better resistance to fingerprinting issues.
 
-Several piece of documentation, tutorials and videos might now be
-out-of-date in one way of another in many places. Please help report
-them or, even better, write updated versions.
+Several tutorials, videos, and bits of documentation might now in one
+way or another be out-of-date in many places. Please help report
+them or, even better, write up some updated versions.
 
 This release is quite a milestone for the project. Update and enjoy!
 
@@ -53,11 +53,11 @@
 The Tor Project now accepts donation in Bitcoin
 -----------------------------------------------
 
-As it is often pointed out in the press, the largest part of the Tor
-Project's financial support is coming from US governement related
-organizations. In the on-going effort to offer as many possible ways
-for individual and organizations to help to the project, bitcoins
-donations are now accepted [XXX].
+As is often pointed out in the press, the majority of the Tor
+Project's financial support comes from US government-linked
+organizations. In the ongoing effort to offer as many possible ways
+for individuals and organizations to give help to the project, Bitcoin
+donations are now being accepted [XXX].
 
 As Roger Dingledine wrote in a subsequent comment: “We really need to get some
 funding for core Tor development, and especially for improving Tor's anonymity,
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
 Tor. Outreach and blocking-resistance are great topics, but we can't let the
 anonymity part rot.”
 
-Head over to the donations page [XXX] to learn more about how to chip in
-bitcoins or other currencies.
+Head over to the donations page [XXX] to learn more about how to chip in with
+Bitcoins or other currencies.
 
  [XXX] https://blog.torproject.org/blog/announcement-tor-project-now-accepting-bitcoin-donations
  [XXX] https://www.torproject.org/donate/donate#bitcoin
@@ -120,10 +120,11 @@
 Miscellaneous news
 ------------------
 
-Many thanks to John Sweeney of otivpn.com for running a mirror of the
-Tor Project website [XXX].
+Many thanks to John Sweeney of otivpn.com [XXX] and Jeremy J. Olson of
+EPRCI [XXX] for running mirrors of the Tor Project website.
 
  [XXX] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2013-December/000403.html
+ [XXX] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2013-December/000411.html
 
 Tor help desk roundup
 ---------------------
@@ -158,6 +159,5 @@
 Possible items:
 
 * Tor proposal status (December 2013) https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-December/005957.html
-* new mirror thanks to Jeremy J. Olson, EPRCI https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2013-December/000411.html
 * Tor-ramdisk 20131216 released http://opensource.dyc.edu/pipermail/tor-ramdisk/2013-December/000107.html
 * Karsten is experimenting with new graphs https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/10460


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