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=== https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/TorWeeklyNews/2013/23 ===
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version 43
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-10T21:23:28+00:00

   one more

--- version 42
+++ version 43
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
   [20] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2013-December/000394.html
   [21] https://www.torproject.org/getinvolved/mirrors.html.en
 
-Thanks BarkerJr [22], DevRandom [23] and Userzap [24] for setting up new
+Thanks BarkerJr [22], DevRandom [23], and Userzap [24] for setting up new
 mirrors!
 
   [22] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-mirrors/2013-October/000381.html

version 42
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-10T21:21:10+00:00

   minor language shuffling

--- version 41
+++ version 42
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
 The Freedom of the Press Foundation just started a campaign to support
 encryption tools for journalists [4] that is going to last for two
-months.  The campaign is gathering funds for Tor core development work,
+months. The campaign is gathering funds for Tor core development work,
 the Tails live system [5], the encrypted mobile communication tools
 RedPhone and TextSecure [6], and the encrypted email platform LEAP [7].
 
@@ -86,8 +86,8 @@
 
   [19] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-December/005913.html
 
-Thanks to Himanshu from India, Andrew Lewman could deploy a new
-script [20] to list mirrors of the Tor Project's website [21].  The new
+Thanks to Himanshu from India, Andrew Lewman was able to deploy a new
+script [20] to list mirrors of the Tor Project's website [21]. The new
 code will ensure that mirrored files are “100% the same as those on
 torproject.org (hashing, pgp signatures, etc)” and will remove and
 re-instate mirrors accordingly.
@@ -104,10 +104,10 @@
 
 Nathan Freitas announced that Orfox was going to replace Orweb [25] in
 the Guardian Project set of secure communication tools. Orfox is based
-on Firefox engine and is likely to behave closer to the Tor Browser.
+on Firefox engine and is likely to behave more like the Tor Browser.
 “However, Orfox is still very early (not alpha yet) and has not been
 fully tested. I would either do your own testing and report back to us,
-or only use the app for non sensitive/critical browsing for now” Nathan
+or only use the app for non sensitive/critical browsing for now”, Nathan
 added [26].
 
   [25] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-talk/2013-December/031331.html 
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
   [28] https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/10309#comment:4
   [29] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-December/005903.html
 
-Christian announced [30] that Globe was “now officially hosted on the
+Christian announced [30] that Globe is “now officially hosted on the
 torproject servers”. Credits to Karsten Loesing and Peter Palfrader for
 setting up the infrastructure. Have a look at this new Tor relay and
 bridge explorer [31]!
@@ -139,13 +139,13 @@
   [33] http://sourceforge.net/projects/injectsocks
 
 The Tails team has issued a call for testing regarding incremental
-upgrades [34].  One more step on the path to provide easy upgrades to
-Tails users.
+upgrades [34] - one more step on the path to providing Tails users with
+easy upgrades.
 
   [34] https://tails.boum.org/news/test_incremental_upgrades/
 
 The release schedule for Tails 0.22.1 [35] has been published by
-intrigeri.  The expected release date for this point release is January
+intrigeri. The expected release date for this point release is January
 21th.
 
   [35] https://mailman.boum.org/pipermail/tails-dev/2013-December/004405.html
@@ -153,12 +153,12 @@
 Tor help desk roundup
 ---------------------
 
-Multiple users have asked the help desk for IPv6 bridges specifically.
-Currently getting IPv6 bridges is not too easy, but the issue is
-known [36] and should be solved as the bridge distributor is improved.
-IPv6 bridges are functional in (at least part of)  China, but we do not
-have many of them to distribute. Please set up an IPv6 bridge if you
-can, it's only one “ORPort” line to add [37] to the usual
+Multiple users have asked the help desk specifically for assistance with
+IPv6 bridges. Currently getting IPv6 bridges is not too easy, but the
+issue is known [36] and should be solved as the bridge distributor is
+improved. IPv6 bridges are functional in (at least part of) China, but
+we do not have many of them to distribute. Please set up an IPv6 bridge
+if you can, it's only one “ORPort” line to add [37] to the usual
 configuration [38].
 
   [36] https://bugs.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/9127



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