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version 46
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-03T13:42:20+00:00

   small language fixes

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 Nick currently lists 25 different people who made writing the new
 proposal possible, and there will be probably some more to add before
-the proposal reaches completion. We will spare the full list to the
-reader, but Tor Weekly News' archives [3] can attest that George
-Kadianakis deserves a special mention for his repeated efforts to move
-things forward.
+the proposal reaches completion. We will spare the reader a full list,
+but Tor Weekly News' archives [3] attest that George Kadianakis
+deserves a special mention for his repeated efforts to move things
+forward.
 
 The proposal aims to replace “the current rend-spec.txt [4], rewritten
 for clarity and for improved design.” The most user visible change from
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 
 The first release candidate for Tails 0.22 [17] is out. The new version
 features a browser based on Firefox 24 and has reached beta stage for
-incremental updates, among other things. Tests are highly welcome as
+incremental updates, among other things. Tests are most welcome, as
 always!
 
   [17] https://tails.boum.org/news/test_0.22-rc1/
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
   [28] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-November/005863.html
   [29] https://github.com/NullHypothesis/exitmap
 
-A Tor client implementation written in pure Java, Orchid [30], has
+Orchid [30], a Tor client implementation written in pure Java,
 silently reached the 1.0 milestone on November 27th. Nathan Freitas is
 looking for comment from the community [31] as he is “thinking about
 having Orbot use it by default, and then offering ARM and x86 binaries
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
   [31] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-November/005884.html
 
 The Electronic Frontier Foundation helped a student group in Iowa
-convince their university they should be allowed to hold discussions
+convince their university that they should be allowed to hold discussions
 about Tor on campus.  The EFF's open letter to universities [32] and
 their “Myths and Facts About Tor” [33] document make useful advocacy
 material.
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
 latency.  Information these games transport over protocols besides TCP
 would not be sent over Tor. Also any software used with Tor needs to be
 tested for proxy obedience. Untested applications might send information
-without using Tor even if they appear to be  configured correctly, and
+without using Tor even if they appear to be configured correctly, and
 without the user realizing it.
 
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